tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28725085.post4962614002454744136..comments2023-10-01T09:20:45.513-07:00Comments on LYRICALLY I AM YOURS: Lyrically speakinghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07695704757793935348noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28725085.post-45889181796967731762007-04-02T10:50:00.000-07:002007-04-02T10:50:00.000-07:00Omohemi: It's a painting, wish I could paint like ...Omohemi: It's a painting, wish I could paint like that but i'm practicing my craft, thanks for stopping byLyrically speakinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07695704757793935348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28725085.post-41041463847536982722007-04-02T09:29:00.000-07:002007-04-02T09:29:00.000-07:00love the poem,but am more in love with the picture...love the poem,but am more in love with the picture or is it a painting?omohemi Bensonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12744353383039618153noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28725085.post-30831735085405651562007-04-02T04:53:00.000-07:002007-04-02T04:53:00.000-07:00Blue Athena: Thank you, come againBlue Athena: Thank you, come againLyrically speakinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07695704757793935348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28725085.post-65382541206174673332007-03-30T21:27:00.000-07:002007-03-30T21:27:00.000-07:00Very nice! Great clarity of thought. :)Very nice! Great clarity of thought. :)Blue Athenahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14499938206252574055noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28725085.post-57778765792481426812007-03-30T16:28:00.000-07:002007-03-30T16:28:00.000-07:00Miss Kai: My iPod is a valuable possession, can't ...Miss Kai: My iPod is a valuable possession, can't leave home without it, i've downloaded about 20 songs last night...i'll list some of them next week :) thanks for askingLyrically speakinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07695704757793935348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28725085.post-91627588712177808482007-03-30T06:07:00.000-07:002007-03-30T06:07:00.000-07:00are you still having fun with your new I-POD?:-Dare you still having fun with your new I-POD?:-DKaihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03525571908541394623noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28725085.post-86266492262979495522007-03-30T05:19:00.000-07:002007-03-30T05:19:00.000-07:00Miss Purl: Thanks for the visit, I know it's about...Miss Purl: Thanks for the visit, I know it's about time, i'm addicted to this iPod. I downloaded more music yesterday<BR/><BR/>Getzapped: Believe me 2000 songs are not enough :)<BR/><BR/>Slum Facade: Thank you<BR/><BR/>Mermaid: You describe the painting so perfectly<BR/><BR/>Cosmic Clown: Thanks for appreciating this piece<BR/><BR/>Miss Gemini: I know this is a bit sad but I felt a little better after I wrote it<BR/><BR/>Jali: Great to see you here, come back again and thank youLyrically speakinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07695704757793935348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28725085.post-63629829802265790262007-03-29T10:56:00.000-07:002007-03-29T10:56:00.000-07:00I love your work! I'll keep reading.I love your work! I'll keep reading.jalihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06490498524551760791noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28725085.post-8041643477571424002007-03-29T07:20:00.000-07:002007-03-29T07:20:00.000-07:00simply powerful and personal I couldn't finish rea...simply powerful and personal I couldn't finish reading it the first time had to come back to this..makes my heart ache..Gemini Girl aka GGhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08259959156950135840noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28725085.post-23313312868360039972007-03-28T22:04:00.000-07:002007-03-28T22:04:00.000-07:00Very touching.....infact one doesnt know how to re...Very touching.....infact one doesnt know how to react....hope it is personal to u.....very softly expressed.......touching i would say one more time......The painting is awesome and speaks for itself........Lyrically yours....I am speechless......cosmic clownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15747591362443638901noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28725085.post-46279146602426864892007-03-28T18:04:00.000-07:002007-03-28T18:04:00.000-07:00'Courage allowing me to peek at the past without a...'Courage allowing me to peek at the past without any display of hatred or anger'<BR/><BR/>I see an invisible line linking this to that poem. The woman is full of forgiveness and hugs the child who could not protect herself.mermaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15895749686844178804noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28725085.post-6940812086353907922007-03-28T16:39:00.000-07:002007-03-28T16:39:00.000-07:00"In blood soaked tearsMy limbs are backwardsSkirt ..."In blood soaked tears<BR/>My limbs are backwards<BR/>Skirt is upside down<BR/>I can’t stop the recollections<BR/>And Daddy is not here to shake them away<BR/>He can’t hear my nightmares<BR/>the surfaces where you scratched<BR/>your name,"<BR/><BR/>I absolutely love it!!!!SLUMP FACADEhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08731954755650424082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28725085.post-49497304115182841412007-03-28T15:45:00.000-07:002007-03-28T15:45:00.000-07:00Yes, my memories are deeply buried, yet still haun...Yes, my memories are deeply buried, yet still haunting. Healing love for all those wounded...<BR/><BR/>Geez, 2000 songs!get zappedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07716557355765204155noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28725085.post-82872968995953977652007-03-28T11:08:00.000-07:002007-03-28T11:08:00.000-07:00Wow. What an emotional poem. Your thoughts are so ...Wow. What an emotional poem. Your thoughts are so vivid. Just....wow.<BR/><BR/>Bout time you got an ipod. Took you long enough (lol)Harlem Purlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01982796206078721723noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28725085.post-89140594410850885052007-03-28T10:47:00.000-07:002007-03-28T10:47:00.000-07:00Mist1: Thanks for the visit, most writers tend to ...Mist1: Thanks for the visit, most writers tend to be lost in translation <BR/><BR/>Soldier: Merci, c'etait necessair. It was necessary to write this for my own sanity<BR/><BR/>Kai: Yes, i'm a fanatic, i can't wait to go home and download more music<BR/><BR/><BR/>Mizjj: Let go of the anger as I have done so myself that's when the healing process startsLyrically speakinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07695704757793935348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28725085.post-83409875348360136522007-03-28T10:30:00.000-07:002007-03-28T10:30:00.000-07:00Beautiful poem. Made me feel such anger. I want so...Beautiful poem. Made me feel such anger. I want so much to protect the girl in the story. That brought up a lot of emotion for me.<BR/><BR/>Congrats on the iPod. I love mine!Miz JJhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08416250760689332164noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28725085.post-28722556631267608052007-03-28T10:11:00.000-07:002007-03-28T10:11:00.000-07:00you got yourself an I-pod?now you have become I-po...you got yourself an I-pod?now you have become I-pod-aholic..lol<BR/>like me!<BR/><BR/>beautiful poem as always!Kaihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03525571908541394623noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28725085.post-40020696699715201102007-03-28T09:30:00.000-07:002007-03-28T09:30:00.000-07:00Il faut becaucoup de courage pour non seulement pe...Il faut becaucoup de courage pour non seulement penser a ce genre de souvenirs, ensuite décider de les écrire, et en plus les publier sur un blog...<BR/>But it helps in the process of letting go, its a step of the therapy.<BR/><BR/>Bagel with cream cheeeese, yes !!! C'est mon petit déjeuner à moi aussi, i even spoke about it in my last entry, we're in sync :-)Soldierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01279314633820060748noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28725085.post-19200547133345186652007-03-28T09:00:00.000-07:002007-03-28T09:00:00.000-07:00I am lost with broken journals too.I am lost with broken journals too.mist1https://www.blogger.com/profile/15225983360910803121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28725085.post-46262006822824464032007-03-28T08:44:00.000-07:002007-03-28T08:44:00.000-07:00Getzapped: Thank you, it's really not a subject I ...Getzapped: Thank you, it's really not a subject I enjoy bringing up since this poem is based on my own personal experience but I felt compelled to do so.<BR/><BR/>I am having fun with my iPod, it holds 2000 songs so you can imagine, so far i've downloaded 40 tunesLyrically speakinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07695704757793935348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28725085.post-23798390221226824122007-03-28T08:31:00.000-07:002007-03-28T08:31:00.000-07:00This poem is so powerful, it will take time to dig...This poem is so powerful, it will take time to digest. It saddens me deeply to know this happens to many young people, only to carry that fear throughout their lives, scarred and scared to let love in or, it enters in perverted ways, twisting us up even more....<BR/><BR/>Have fun with your new iPod ;)get zappedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07716557355765204155noreply@blogger.com