BEAUTY IN HIS FIELD OF DREAMS
What he paints is her skin
With oil soaked by the sun
He makes her in his creation
What represents beauty in the horizon
His pastel fingers caresses love in her eyes
Melancholic dreams in a field of orchards
Cheerful rays spill raw notes into her peach lantern
Fingers molding her into gold clay without any shades
The beautified goddess is preserved on a bathtub of grass
Bubbled with fragrant notes of peonies
Massaging his imagination with her angelic face
Touched and re-touched by her floral scent
He puts her on a pedestal
High up for all to praise
They will all see she is the sweet muse of his exhibition
She even glows in the dark
Come and reach for beauty
Before you kiss her goodnight
© 2006 by Cathy Delaleu
12 comments:
You are so creative with your wording. Thanks for sharing. Have you ever thought about posting yourself narrating your poems? If so, check out Evoca.
Also thanks for your blog entry for the CC#2.
Thank you Ty. I've never heard of Evoca, I will check it out, it would be nice to share my poems verbally since I've done it before in front of an audience.
hey, thanks so much for coming by...
ur writings are wonderful:)
Thank you for stopping by
Your writing is very impressive and inspiring. I feel honored that you stopped by my page you are truly talented.
Beautiful image and poem!
Hey what's up... Thanks for coming by my page... Hopefully you'll be joining us in a few weeks and kick some of your lines live here in the city.
I will be there Curious1, thanks for the invite and support
I like this poem because it creates an image that one can clearly see. So vivid.
Your writing is amazing! I can't wait to explore your website further. Thanks for visiting my blog. My website is www.alwaysscrappin.com
I can't figure out how to make it a link. Sorry!
Thanks for the inspiration!
Steph
You join the earth, the sky, the painter, and the subject in magnificent harmony. I can't tell who is who, or what is what.
Calming and beautiful.
Thanks for visiting my site!
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