PLEASURE PRINCIPLE
I thought I felt it
The heartbeat of a rainbow
After a lover’s duet
The flattering of whispers grin
Mixed with an organza of caress
Thrown by a cool air after a summer’s thunderstorm
I thought my soul reached midnight’s love on foot
With sweat-soaked offerings
I thought I fell into a comatic lust where his name
Is repeated like a favorite continent
I must have been struck by lightning
For I held on to the sheets with an arched back attached to his pulse
Sucking away his sunrise with satisfaction guaranteed
The taste of sherbert on swollen nipples
He pats me on the ass while I nod like a horse in tears
Ending a race filled with petals inside my nostrils
His grin is peppered with semen
Throbbing drums behind an angelic chorus
When he ventures aimlessly with plows
He growls like Africa’s sweet water
Then silence filters
Our breath dimmers lightly
Until he paraphrases oneness with a hump
© 2006 by Cathy Delaleu
www.delaleuwritings.com
11 comments:
Is this piece about me? Maybe I just want it to be about me. Maybe I want a woman to express in such delight moments shared with me. Funny, hadn't thought much about it until I read this piece. GREAT!
Thanks SF, i'm sure there's someone out there who will woo you someday with such sweet words :) Keep your eyes and ears open.
I thought I felt it
The heartbeat of a rainbow
After a lover’s duet
That description is awesome!!
Just beautiful.You just know how to express your feelings in poetry.
When you and nature and the lover are inseparable, you have found the strings that connect all souls together.
lovely, and I like the picture from no david!!!
-I hope you don't mind me blogrolling you...you left such a nice comment on one of my other blogs.
Intoxicating.
Beautiful works. And thank you for your kind comment. Im glad you could stop by my blog.
"I thought I fell into a comatic lust where his name"
DAMN!!! "comatic?" DOUBLE DAMN!!!
most excellent.
yes i would be inclined to enjoy such an intense session as the one described here. the way you intertwine such seemingly unrelated words is quite exquisite.
This was incredible... extremely well composed
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