Magical and Timeless
It is good to be home, to be surrounded by silence and to write. You know that feeling when you hit that sweet spot, that's how it felt when I sat in front of my laptop and my fingers hit the keys. Boy, what a feeling. So, I came up with words rambling in my head...I had to write them down
RAMBLE ACT OF THOUGHTS
I curled passion and thunder last night in my belly
Woke up with contractions
Gave birth to his love
He hurricaned lust to me
And like a virgin with goosebumps
I swallowed him whole
4 comments:
every time i read this post (and i've read it several times), i love where i land and feel it as though for the first time "like a virgin with goosebumps, i swallowed him whole." your words are rich and luscious (like the word "belly" and "swallowed") and your expressions exquisite ("i curled passion and thunder"). your work is lovely...
I feel that exact same way when I write something amazing, and then I get all giddy.
This poem was really... I can't think of a proper description except that it made me feel and visualize what you meant. Good stuff.
Thank you ladies for reading my rambling thoughts
Wow, that's what I'm about to be on, in about 10 minutes....*lol*
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